Wish The Day Away Comments

The fingers of the clock Would not move around the face Time seemed to be endless As we gazed out into space. What a fine expression. tony

Powerful poem about reality, and what we really do.

Like the style of your poems and this one has such meaning,

A touchy poem, i love the last two verses...so true.

Very interesting and thought provoking poem! Love the rhyming rhythm also!

A thoughtful poem...