Monday, August 7, 2017

Wish(Recast) Comments

Rating: 2.5

It will be so much of misery
If I should die later lonely
For you would have gone then
Miles and miles away to a place unknown
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of love. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 07 August 2017

Relationship between a husband and his wife is considered eternal as per our cultural beliefs and you have nicely brought to fore its emotional side in this poem. A fine treat to the heart and soul. Thanks. You are the joy of living / The morning and the evening The sun and the moon / And star of my little sky upon

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