Today mind is out of order
And heart is very heavy
Sorrow, I can not carry you any more
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Nice free flowing poem to present free wandering soul. Thank you.
excellent thoughts. as we all have these thoughts from time to time. heart at this moment wants to fly to an unknown land (somewhere in fantasy land.)
collected comment from elsewhere like it, it has a thematic rhythm Samuel Kim35 minutes ago startling mature rhythm i liked it
a comment from elsewhere paul naragon34 minutes ago This is very nicely expressed and a delight to read like a theraputic massage. Thanks for sharing.
a beautiful wish in lovely metaphors, a delightful write.