Sunday, October 10, 2010

Wish Of Mother Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wish of Mother Earth

1 am the origin I am the shelter
Smallest of the particle and billions of lives
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Santosh Sharma
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Leela Devi 06 January 2011

every body should read it

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Seema Chowdhury 07 December 2010

its a very nice poem, hope more people will start thinking like this. thanks for sharing.

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Meetika Srivastava 04 December 2010

Powerful and thought-provoking piece of writing.

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Audrey Heller 24 October 2010

Indeed, a very powerful message, done with expertice! I thank you, for sharing!

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Whispering Rose 24 October 2010

a good poem, we belong to this earth and we must protect it

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Pranab K Chakraborty 21 October 2010

Personification of the described object in first person in poetry is very old in the form of expression, yet, what have you tried to expose that saying is very sensitive and also a burning issue now-a-days. When Earth is the main object, we are beside you as a reader. And if machinery does not betray I put 10/10 for this reason. Thank you. Regards, pranab

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Nell Sheridan 10 October 2010

This is a striking poem unlike anything else I have read. Your descriptions are unique your style beyond individual. Thank you for your invitation.I look forward to enjoying many more of your works. Jen

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