Wish Never Ends..... Comments

This is no doubt a good piece with a reflection on life that with birth wish never ends....very well spelt and well crafted.......thanks for sharing.........10++++++

Life is a mystery unsolved, ....... this is your vision of life, ..... but I think life is mystery but solved, ....... again, Formula all failed to resolve, ....... this is your vision of life, .....but I think many formulas have been successful to resolve, , ....... these are my visions of life.......... ......... thanks for sharing,10

Life is a mystery unsolved Formula all failed to resolve The wise men said it correctly the more you try, it will revert abjectly. a fine thought...... and true about life......... a mystery which we will never be able to understand fully. tony

Wonderfully thought, Wonderfully worded, Wonderfully rhyming! One of the best short poems that i have read.......10

Life is full of mystery. Many troubles come life are unsolved too. Love is kept secretly in heart. Thoughts generate in cyclic manner. One after another wishes are generated. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

Wish never ends thoughts never bend......powerfully expressed! An excellent piece of work my friend! (10)