Thursday, August 1, 2013

Wish Me Luck! Comments

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Each of us is put to test
everyday and every time.
Each question appear in a flash of time
But each answer is unique in its own way.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2018

Each of us is put to test everyday and every time. Each question appear in a flash of time But each answer is unique in its own way........so true and much impressive. It is really a beautiful poem having touching expression and nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Arupam Maity 28 August 2016

In this notorious world, we often feel ourselves helpless. the childhood memories, the bonding with mother, all these nice memories haunt us relentlessly, beautiful expression. I'll also request you to read my works also posted herein

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Amitava Sur 03 July 2014

Geetha - thank for presenting such a such a penning with so many ifs and buts but ultimately you came out with the gist that this path of life is uncertain and I wish you all good luck

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Akhtar Jawad 27 June 2014

Answer depends upon the question. Lovely questions get lovely answers. But when a foolish question is replied in a lovely manner the student under a test becomes superior to the paper setter.

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Emeyazia Iwe Chukwudi 05 August 2013

You have done it again. I wished you luck. Well done, Geetha.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 August 2013

But each answer is unique in its own way... nicely portrayed.. good poem....10

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Shahzia Batool 02 August 2013

fine analogy geetha: Riding is smooth as long as you take control of the horse. But once you loose the control then The horse will take control of your life too. wishing you the best! ! !

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Dave Walker 02 August 2013

Life can have it's ups and downs, but if we grasp the ride with both hands we have a chance to be who we want to be. A great poem.

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Rajendran Muthiah 02 August 2013

Excellent. Ride of life is like riding a horse. When you lose control, the horse takes it. Beautiful idea and images. *****

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Heather Wilkins 01 August 2013

once we have control of the horse we must remain in control. that is the way life is. good write

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Neela Nath Das 01 August 2013

Good one and a piece of wisdom.Loved.

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Ramesh Rai 01 August 2013

i like your opinion liked your write.if we peep into others make more frustrated

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Ramesh Rai 01 August 2013

i like your opinion liked your write.if we peep into others make more frustrated

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 August 2013

The answer is like an arrow when released from a bow It cannot be taken back like email sent at the click of a button. Beautiful poem. Have a great ride. Best of luck.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 August 2013

For the ride of life wish you good luck, great write.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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