Going down hill with arms open
Rapidly flying towards the Sun;
I wish I were a bird light and small
Soar up to sky and enjoy a great fall;
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I loved the meticulous details.Nature nurtures our innocent feelings.So cool!
very good poem indeed. Most of us often think about being different than what we really are, and you showed it with fantastic writing style. I enjoyed every words of it..
makes me want to write something like this because at times i have wishful thinking too-lovely verses
beautiful poem, made me want to be all those...but then _may be_ all those wish to be in our place too...very simply and nicely set, thank you for sharing
What a fantastic imagination! Lovely poem. The ending is convincingly relaxing. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem.Rekhamandagere
Amazing poem, expressing desire to mingle and merry in nature's various elements with gay abandon.