Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Wish I Were A Comments

Rating: 4.0

Going down hill with arms open
Rapidly flying towards the Sun;
I wish I were a bird light and small
Soar up to sky and enjoy a great fall;
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Bharati Nayak 16 August 2015

Amazing poem, expressing desire to mingle and merry in nature's various elements with gay abandon.

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Neela Nath Das 11 August 2015

I loved the meticulous details.Nature nurtures our innocent feelings.So cool!

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Mindie Hodgdon 10 November 2011

vary nice poem. enjoyed reading..

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Diana Rose Tolentino 09 September 2011

very good poem indeed. Most of us often think about being different than what we really are, and you showed it with fantastic writing style. I enjoyed every words of it..

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Jisha Ct 14 July 2011

very nice..poem enjoyed reading...

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 July 2011

makes me want to write something like this because at times i have wishful thinking too-lovely verses

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Anuja Krishnan 27 June 2011

wow....lovely Keep going! ! ! ! !

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Whispering Rose 23 June 2011

beautiful poem, made me want to be all those...but then _may be_ all those wish to be in our place too...very simply and nicely set, thank you for sharing

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Rekha Mandagere 17 June 2011

What a fantastic imagination! Lovely poem. The ending is convincingly relaxing. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem.Rekhamandagere

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