Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Wish I Was Dead Comments

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Pressure builds up I just cant take it
living in this world is just not worth it
there is nothing going right for me I just cant wait
the day ill end my life, I will finally appreciate
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joe kanon
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Erin 15 September 2022

Amazing. Right there with you.

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sdaasd 29 March 2018

i like this poem it makes me relate to the feelings arising for my horrible life

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Unwritten Soul 28 May 2013

You can make your life as what you dream, even in dark it still can be beautiful...just express the preciousness that already got inside in you..but then go find it..i also sometimes fall in the dark, its fine but we should never waste time for it and cry..let do some shine in this darkness..it looks prettier in dark background_Soul

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Joe Kanon 15 May 2013

if I convinced u may not be around to read them... this is what I do to not feel what I feel... I right poems

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Guess Who 15 May 2013

sometimes humans prefer / wish to be dead...... personnaly i think that's wrong but here you kind of convinced me by your phrases of sorrow and little despair..... i loved your poem keep the write up hope to read fro you soon GuessWho

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