Wish I Lived There Still Comments

this poem has such a huge canvas, , where to begin and where to end! ! ! ! mind blowing poeticism, , the 'death certificate' is teh ultimate image, , so tangible and so legible, , , difficult not to notice the signature of the ultimate truth, , it does not matter how the cemetery is close or afar geographically, , the poem hits hard, , , the glompses of 'let us go then..you and i'' but here the protagonist is all alone, , the streets are familiar, , and yet so remote, , difficult to belong to these streets of an alien land, , , my poem of the day, , thanx