Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Wish I! … Live In Your Heart Comments

Rating: 4.1

Wish I could, just live in your heart.
The human bit and the spiritual part.

In fearless daring, to touch your hair.
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Yasmin Khan 20 July 2013

Very ecstatic and emotive composition...how gallantly you've expressed your wish!

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Meena Mustafa 30 June 2012

Wow! Wow! Wow! beautiful composition.

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Chris Jibero 23 October 2010

Lovely.The heart is best place to live.Well done.

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Sahar Sahar 15 February 2010

beautiful romantic mood, i think you have done beautifully

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Reshma Ramesh 14 December 2009

beautiful.........in the mood doc?

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Kesav Easwaran 09 November 2009

Romantic transcendance, Saadat...i suppose you are ready for a 'mythical Hanuman act'... Hanuman jumped past the ocean in mission as an envoy...here a lover fuelled by the force of love! Good work...thanks...10

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6000km sounds just so far away but you bridge gap with your love filled words. A romantic and heartfelt poem...

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Sonya Florentino 08 October 2009

enjoyed this bold proud love unhindered by distance...and jumping off the page! !

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Indira Babbellapati 03 October 2009

6000km is closeness, doc...you know what i mean...

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A . 01 October 2009

aray yeah kya aam logoon kee samagh may aana wali shairee ki han, lagta han kuch asar ho gya han... not of my comments but of ttttttt.. hehehe errrrr : P~

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Lady Grace 29 September 2009

wish i was a child hold me in your arms wish i was a bird warm me with your wings....

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Rehana Nazli 29 September 2009

Wish I could, just live in your heart. The human bit and the spiritual part. A romantic, melodic poem from the depth of your heart...what a sweet and sincere wish for your beloved 6000 km apart/away.

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M A 29 September 2009

Sigh...............

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Joseph Poewhit 29 September 2009

Lots of moving passions

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 September 2009

Well structured passionate poem. Good one. Enjoyed reading it.

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