Wish I could, just live in your heart.
The human bit and the spiritual part.
In fearless daring, to touch your hair.
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Romantic transcendance, Saadat...i suppose you are ready for a 'mythical Hanuman act'... Hanuman jumped past the ocean in mission as an envoy...here a lover fuelled by the force of love! Good work...thanks...10
6000km sounds just so far away but you bridge gap with your love filled words. A romantic and heartfelt poem...
enjoyed this bold proud love unhindered by distance...and jumping off the page! !
aray yeah kya aam logoon kee samagh may aana wali shairee ki han, lagta han kuch asar ho gya han... not of my comments but of ttttttt.. hehehe errrrr : P~
wish i was a child hold me in your arms wish i was a bird warm me with your wings....
Wish I could, just live in your heart. The human bit and the spiritual part. A romantic, melodic poem from the depth of your heart...what a sweet and sincere wish for your beloved 6000 km apart/away.
Well structured passionate poem. Good one. Enjoyed reading it.
Very ecstatic and emotive composition...how gallantly you've expressed your wish!