Sunday, September 13, 2015

Wish I Had A Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish I had a mother, to pat my head and smile at me
I wish I had a mother, to worry over and run to
I wish I had a mother, to assuage me and still my fear
I wish I had a mother, to calm my racing heart and to say it will be fine
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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Really heartfelt poem, all the attributes of a loving mother, that you want in your life. Sad, but beautiful at the same time. Love it, give you a 10. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Athanasius Okowa 24 October 2015

thank you for your opinion and time RoseAnn....

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Charity Nduhiu 14 September 2015

I pray that you accept the situation and wish you also accept the mother figure because she can also assist. Loved reading the poem

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Monarchist Oleg

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