Wish, I Could Fly... Comments

(cont.) Alone, broken mirror of dreams high... i believe you mean high dreams, and have arranged the words to bring out your rhyme. nice! i also like the repetition of Playing moon, stars are no more shy... to MyPoemList and into my November showcase (of poets by PH poets, featuring poems from Indian subcontinent poets this time) . if you have questions, please ask. thanks, bri ;)

i rarely (super-rarely) have cried in my adulthood, BUT i too wish i could fly. i mean like a bird, though airplanes are ok. (just ok) . and i mean literally fly, not figuratively as i THINK the poet means. yes, sad does make an appearance in the poem, truly a feeling, as the poet's About Me mentions s/he has. i recommend the About Me/Biography on PH. (cont.)

I born to cry, true, namaskar