Wish I Could Come With You! Comments

intense deep words..outstanding creativity

intensely developed each line...outstanding creativity! *

Mother is the last shelter. This poem reflects the painful life of a South Asian woman who after the whole fatigue of a day is not better than a maid. She, however, gets peace in the loving arms of her mother. When her mother is sick and she thinks her last shelter may be snatched from her, she desires to remain in the peaceful shelter and to accompany her the final eternal journey. Great and impressive.....10

an intensely emotive write, bitter sweet.

Feeling of loneliness sometimes takes over and leaves no place for a positive feeling. It cannot spread any more and only way is to recede. Beautiful poem expressing deep feelings.

As a poem this is such a poignant expression of feelings and it has such high level of emotive intensity..... But if it is a real reflection of your present mental state, I feel let down! I love Geetha of the former kind.... with an attitude of 'what may come....... the courageous, cofident and unyieding type! Come on, cheer up! This is only a passing phase! I give you a 10

This poem is soaked with the pensive mood.You have perfectly portrayed it.Loved.

A sad but heart touching poem. You wrote this is your imagination but the imagination always has something behind it. I have well wishes for you.Sahir Ludhhianvi wrote: - Zindigi jabr sahi zulm sahisam hi sahi- -Dil ki faryad sahi rooh ka matam hi sahi- -Humne har hal mein jeene ki qasam khai hay..

Very touching indeed.........Geetha.......emotions very poignantly expressed.........with solemn words