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this is nice and powerful piece, its contents is clear

certinly i wished to celebrate it....10

Life is not a numbers game...in my view. Astrology may deem birth date to be vital. Its just one day for which corporations make money from you. The only date that matters is when you are deprived of the chance to help other souls bridge this chasm of suffering. While many celebrate in splendour,1 billion in Africa do not have enough food. The STREET PEOPLE in India are suffering too. God gives you each day to work for him. A day off is, I guess, your prerogative! You made me think!

the poem needs more flow......

Deep, emotional and lovely to reed.............

Many happy returns of the day to You! Let peace and development enrich mankind and even if end comes let it happen in peace! Nice wish and nice poem to read!