Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Wish And Wash Away Comments

Rating: 4.0

Is all a still thought
Closer to the shore's waves
Your mind bares sound that
Brings hopes and kills them
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David Morales
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 14 October 2009

An impressive, mind-boggling well done write

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Nathan Barkley 13 October 2009

I really like the comparison in the last stanza with the foot prints disappear last with your wishes pretty good

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