Sunday, October 11, 2009

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Rating: 2.8

I've sat here all this time
Searching for a reason
Holding onto this season
Waiting for the sun to shine
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Natasha Dowdy
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Gold Fish 11 October 2009

This poem is a moving piece full of intense emotions. The death of a loved one will leaves a void as if part of you dies with them. The part that dies is in the heart, but the memories of them no one can steal or destroy; this is what you have to hold onto to help you to continue. The feeling of loss never really goes away it just become less intense and frequents the mind less often. I wish you well my friend. Keep writing to express yourself its good for the heart and mind.

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Leah Ayliffe 11 October 2009

meaningful poem its always hard to go on after someone you love is taken.. find more strength each day

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