Wish Comments

Logical; I wish you good luck Sea'n.

You know what they say... careful what you wish for... dan =)

so true Sean, so true! ! when we are all young we just want to get older and we are finally old enough we don't like it.simple but poignant! keep them coming :) HBH

Sean, Not many poets or people of 18 project themselves to old age and imagine what that might be like. This is both a cautionary tale and a setting of choice levels. Realize that you could change either outcome to the other or something you have not yet imagined! Good write. I continue to be impressed with your intelligence, imagination and skill as a writer. Keep up the good work. Best, Hugh

Very nice poem Sean. This reminds me of the ''Careful what you wish for...'' I do think somebody is listening to those wishes we make under our breath. I enjoyed this Sean, it makes you think. Sincerely, Mary