Thursday, September 29, 2005

Wish Comments

Rating: 4.5

i wish so intensely

that after an hour or two
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John Allen
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Sue Ann Simar 16 June 2007

pretending and smoldering, another gem here

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Lea Simpson 01 June 2006

I love this piece. The wishing to believe in a wish. Lovely, thank you.

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Joseph Daly 01 June 2006

Wonderful, succint piece. Beautiful imagery and the expression of a pause between each line seems to illustrate an intyake of breath. Demanding the reader ponders each line. I like it when the writer demands effort from the reader. That shows confidence and strength.

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