Wisely - Standstill Comments

Wise and witty.......................10

you can't run away from death thanks Asim

No gravity, no sun, no moon And no clock and time is standstill...You are definitely clever to observe truth on death and birth. A fantastic composition shared with reality...10

The death has given a fantastic repartee to the so called wisdom of the wise man. His soulless body hanging and standing still is the space was the outcome of his machinations to evade death, in which he utterly failed. Nice poem on life and death. Enjoyed reading.10 points.