Sunday, October 25, 2015

Wise Sense Sparks Comments

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Wonderful creation is tied in law
We are bound to work to live here
Why we come and go far we know not
But still we take birth and see light
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2015

Very creative work, Sir....from your poem I liked the following lines the most although every word is used perfectly. We learn the art of God to light Lighting life we too again unite Wise sense sparks every where This fills glitter in life again We realize this wise sense That this universe conveys.

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Liza Sudina 29 October 2015

Wise sense sparks - the name caught me! I was waiting for Universe in this poem - and it came out in the end!

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Akhtar Jawad 28 October 2015

A beautiful spiritual poem.................................................

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Agatha Eliza 27 October 2015

One of the most beautiful definition of life and purpose I've read so far. Enchanting poem! 10 +++

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Loke Kok Yee 26 October 2015

Full of wisdom and well presented Thanks-10

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Sanjukta Nag 26 October 2015

Another gem draped with spirituality revealing the truth of life and death. Remarkable write sir!

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Kelly Kurt 25 October 2015

A wisely written poem. Thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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