Tuesday, May 23, 2023

Wisdom Teeth - Humorous And Satire Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was at a loss for words to describe
the discomfort of my missing wisdom teeth,
so, I turned to prayer.
With a plea of 'just four more to reach thirty-two',
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M. Asim Nehal
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Pallavi Tripathi 25 May 2023

Food for thought. Wisdom is a journey not a destination

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2023

Five stars and to my fav list.

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2023

What an amazing write! I enjoyed the humour to the hilt.I now see wisdom in a new light.It should not be associated with teeth, as teeth are meant for biting.

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2023

BUT................I feel somehow robbed. I so LIKE to find things in a poem that I can help to correct! ! ! e.g. typos I don't recall anything I didn't like, except MAYBE that I, Bri, didn't write this one. : (

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2023

For some reason, Asim, I was very impressed with your 'job well done'. NOW, take care of what you have been blessed with, and watch those 'sweets'! ! !

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2023

I made this a 'favorite' and I sent it 5 stars. So, you may have ONLY two wisdom teeth, BUT you now have five stars. Congratulations on all.

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2023

A poem about teeth made me think of picking teeth which led me to my poem(s) , Stop Picking On Me. But they are about something else. Feel free to read it/them. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2023

'The difficulty cleaning impacted, partially erupted wisdom teeth increases the risk of developing a painful, inflammatory gum condition called pericoronitis (per-ih-kor-o-NI...'

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2023

'Asim, I've just begun to read poem (at your request) and I assume you are speaking as a boy or young man whose 'wisdom teeth' have not yet 'erupted'

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2023

Asim, I've just begun to read poem (at your request) and I assume you are speaking as a boy or young man whose 'wisdom teeth' have not yet 'erupted'

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Sabahat Batool 23 May 2023

Fantastic and realistic with a touch of humor and satire about the concept of common people that wisdom is associated with this

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2023

Now I love the humorous pace of this very enjoyable poem, full marks my friend

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 May 2023

I hear you my friend I lost a tooth in January

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Anjandev Roy 23 May 2023

Such a wonderful piece...... very interesting......thank u... friend....

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Rajan T Renganathan 23 May 2023

Great write, I liked the humour and the satire at how people see the wisdom teeth. Interesting piece.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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