Wisdom Or Folly? Comments

2 – I'd begin last stanza with " But" . to MyPoemList, but will probably only share one of yours in my next 'monthly' list, maybe this one. bri ;) This is one of your best & maybe most true to life for many.

1 – " moth to a flame" you can say THAT again. And AGAIN! ! i've been burned enough over nearly fifty years, and my wings are almost singed to the limit. It's just that " other things" follow on the coattails of love. Of course my partners have also suffered! Sh+t! ! !

Another fantastic poem Ma'am. The second stanza is my favourite. I loved the analogy of the moth, so appropriate. Into my poemlist