Sunday, August 14, 2011

Wisdom Of The Ancient Comments

Rating: 5.0

True gaiety moves you close to tears
When happiness is cloned you 're moved to tear
Where I am, I am with my angels
When I vamoose, I vamoose with them all
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Kolawole Ajao
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Shamin Shah 18 August 2011

very beautiful + it is short. 'True gaiety moves you close to tears When happiness is cloned you 're moved to tear'. I just love this part.... so simple and nice and of course TRUE! ! ! ! keep it up! ! ! !

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Peace Okhomina 15 August 2011

The poem really explains alot, nice

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Jim Troy 14 August 2011

My good friend I am fully awake now and really enjoyed this beautiful poem a lot. And it is such a wonderful truth which I now see with ease. I love the way you bring things forward for us to ponder for a few seconds and then of course there is a cognition.............. Good One Jim Troy

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Ramesh Rai 14 August 2011

indeed a nice poem, keep it up with best wishes

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Ramesh Rai 14 August 2011

indeed a nice poem, keep it up with best wishes

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Dave Walker 14 August 2011

Really like this poem. The more I read it the more i like it. Best wishes Dave

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Kolawole Ajao

Kolawole Ajao

Akure, Ondo State Nigeria
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