Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Wisdom Of Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

True love will not easily split into parts.
To represent truth, love is wholehearted.

Can a droplet be mistaken for a sea,
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Fay Slimm
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Khairul Ahsan 04 July 2013

Very true, emphatically so. Beautifully expressed. Wisdom of love is overwhelming. Truly, Love outlasts life.

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Susan Jarvis 07 December 2009

These beautiful couplets of love have touched my heart, Fay. A wonderful poem! S :)

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Georgia Girl 02 December 2009

Fay this is fantastic and you should publish it, very wise and true and so well put together....10

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Ken E Hall 30 November 2009

Love is in the air and the wisdom of it intoxicating 'Love stands alone' holding two....I can say this with conviction, my wife was 16 and I 19 when wed, and 50 odd years on still in love! ....................++++10 for wisdom regards

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David Harris 21 November 2009

Fay, a beautiful concept of couplets on an equally beautiful poem filled with the wisdom of love. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Bob Gibson 19 November 2009

A beautiful poem, from finish to start true love to brings pain, to a soldiers wife's heart how do they endure? the time spent apart the longing, the emptiness! when its time to depart

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Bob Blackwell 19 November 2009

Wise words from a wise lady, you are so right true love never dies. Lovely couplets written by a true poet. Love Bob 10

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Sandra Martyres 18 November 2009

'Love stands alone with it's clear clarion call. We who say we loved once never loved at all. ' Very wisely said - Fay....and well crafted too...10

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Georgia Girl 18 November 2009

This was written deep in thought and was written very well, beautiful...10

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Patti Masterman 18 November 2009

So wisely beautiful; artistic and delicate. (smile)

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Tom Balch 18 November 2009

Wise word's of love from a wise and well loved lady, nice one Fay 10/10 Tom

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Joseph Poewhit 18 November 2009

Interesting concept of love and parts

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Catrina Heart 18 November 2009

amazing wisdom of love................great rhyming couplets shared! ! !

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Fay Slimm

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