Wisdom Comments

Captures a part of life's sorrows well.

the wisdom that you find within, is the lord taking away our sins. at times we do not think the way we should, because we are blinded by the lights. but wisdom comes when we stand and fight.

Nice poem with excellent rhyme which is your signature.

Good write...........

A magnanimous composition my friend... great rhyme scheme with the abab quatrains followed...awesome wisdom and point of views in life! 10+++

well realized poem, lovely to read...10

I started to feel shine In my painful flare It’s like on cloud nine My pain is bliss I swear' you know friend.. when i read these lines i always remember the first time you invited me to read one of your poems.... and how much you v moved on.. where as my life is still stagnating.. this is a nice write indeed..10 with love shan