Tuesday, December 21, 2021

Wintry Memory Comments

Rating: 4.7

Chilly wind
Churning my memories
With the passing days
And mixing a dizzy mood
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Smrutiranjan Parida
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Satyam Das 21 October 2023

Try to work on Rhymes and using imagery. Like 'Life has become an open book, with pages being turned by the unruly wind through the window'

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Satyam Das 21 October 2023

Much depth in the Lines.

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