Monday, December 29, 2014

Wintertime Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

Snowflakes a-fallin', in the kitchen Mom's callin',
'You youngins' get out of that bed! '
The day's now a-wastin', the biscuits a-bakin'
And I got lots to do 'ere ye're fed.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
mom
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Mihaela Pirjol 22 January 2015

This is a heart-warming poem...a delightful read...a tender evocation of childhood memories...beautifully written!

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Leloudia Migdali 21 January 2015

Such a wonderful poem! Yes, I agree that such Winter memories never die!

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Soul Watcher 06 January 2015

It is REALLY a pretty poem makes you live the moments you are taking about. Your reading has been mixed with music you choose, so they give together a very nice tone. But actually i see that your dropped a word in the poem although your read it in your recitation, in stanza number five, line number one, (It seems just yesterday.....) it should to be as you read it (It seems just LIKE yesterday.....) I like it, thank you for sharing that with us.

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Valsa George 05 January 2015

A beautiful poem bringing in a train of sweet childhood memories of a blissful time! Yes, those memories never die, but surge in our mind now and then to sweep us back to a time of bliss and unalloyed joy when we lived under the loving care of our parents! Though its rendition I couldn't hear, I love the poem as it has evoked such strong memories in me! I invite you to read my poem Nostalgia..... almost similar in spirit!

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* Sunprincess * 05 January 2015

............oh I loved this poem.....thanks so much for sharing this with me....hope your day is filled with many blessings....and your new year also :)

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Galina Italyanskaya 12 November 2014

I've guessed from the first stanza that it's about your childhood!) Much enjoyed your poem! It's so... warm and heartfelt! And that charming southern language!) Great piece and wonderful memories! Thank you for sharing!

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Michael Gale 11 November 2008

A great memory filled poem. gave it a tenner, kind Sir. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Raj Nandy 10 November 2008

We can certainly relive through our memories! A good poem Mr T aylor! -Raj Nandy

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Fay Slimm 10 November 2008

What wonderful scenes you painted for us with this one Loyd, and like Tia, I too feel I am viewing a warm movie about real family life. Lots of us can only yearn for such memories but thank you for sharing yours in this way. Do keep writing about such memories. from Fay.

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Tia Maria 18 August 2008

I can't stop smiling, I have this little movie going on in my head, with the accents & all. What a rich life you have had - absolutely wonderful to read, thank you.

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Mamta Agarwal 18 May 2008

i too had humble beginnings, but those are the most cherished memories of my life.when ever i get overwhelmed i withdraw to the treasre trove of memries- those bickerings with siblings. tending to the garden. a really lovely and well composed poem. thanks Taylor

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Christine Austin Cole 28 April 2008

I made my way to this piece after having read your biography (which is warm and wonderful by the way!) . It did take a bit of searching as the title here is slightly different (I was looking under 'W' originally) - which I mention only because it offers the glimpse that you promised and I thought it would be a shame if others missed it. Chickens and hogs and dogs and goodness, ELEVEN siblings? ! Your early years were clearly quite different than mine and I thank you, sir, for sharing your memories with us. It's lovely to see how fondly you recall those days. I must say - there's a lot of warmth in these Wintertime Memories! ! ! ~Christine

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Marilyn Lott 12 April 2008

I love to go back in time too and I enjoyed going back with you into your childhood. Love your rhyme and your wintertime memories. Thanks! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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