Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Winters Shroud. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Winters mist rolled over the hill
Passing through the forested trees
Hauntingly, as a shroud
Moving slowly, no breeze
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Robert Green
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Hans Vr 29 March 2014

Icy, cold, the reader feels the chill. Very well written. Moments of winter very well captured in flowing verses.

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Valerie Dohren 07 March 2014

Sounds very winttery Robert, but not this winter. Great poem, well penned.

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Poetheart Morgan 24 February 2014

Good to see your poems again Poet... say goodby the winter...you describe so well the season.....so melancholic...rich in details....Thanks Poet....

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