Friday, January 21, 2022

Winter's Grip Comments

Rating: 5.0

The trees in my backyard
Have been stripped of
Their crowning glory
And lovely armor,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 15 February 2023

You articulate beautifully even in the grip of winter!

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Soran M. H 26 January 2022

Their strength, grace and beauty, Despite pain and suffering.

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Soran M. H 26 January 2022

The deeper side of meaning here indicates that we should rise after falling, be strong after weakness, but it has expressed in the language of metaphor by using the symbol of trees, thank you for this master piece of poetry

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 January 2022

A big statement on the naked facts of life. The poem exhorts us to ‘stand upright even in the moments of grief and loss…" lovely.

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Sandra Feldman 23 January 2022

Only poets with greatbeauty of soul and kindness can express such love and tenderness, that even in the coldest of winters warms our hearts and reaches all in perfect conception and rhyme. Thank you so much for this unforgettable and lovable creation.

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Sandra Feldman 23 January 2022

So sweet and beautiful

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

oh! that was stunning! your words painted a very memorable scene, Rose Marie--I would not change a word--i this poem shows the the brillioance of selecting the perfect word and crafting the best image---5 stars were not enough--faving it

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 22 January 2022

Yeah they never shy away from their work, no complaints as well. You sketched winter perfectly with pains of plants and trees. Full *****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

though bare and no leaves left anymore, through the poet's beautiful mind, the reader can still imagine, how she truly loves these trees and she is proud, that's why we can read this scintillating poem. Thank you so much for creating.5 Stars fullest.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

This is a very fascinating poem of love for own trees, preciously thought and described, this well captured poem shows her immense love for the trees in the backyard.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

artistically sketches the state of her beautiful trees, you can immediately imagine how elegant the trees still look, even though it is the dead of winter and bare.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

Most fascinatingly composed poem about own trees in the backyard, for the reader it feels so close to home. How the great poetess through the metaphor of a dancer,

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Rebecca Navarre 22 January 2022

The imagery and feel captured here is truly brilliant! .. Filled with awesome beauty and heart! .............

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Rebecca Navarre 22 January 2022

of winter, so beautifully expressed! .. By a truly beautiful and heart moving poetess dear Rose Marie, Ever so many Endless Stars! ..+++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 January 2022

Such a beautifully powerful poem! . Filled with such emotion! .. These thoughts

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Anjandev Roy 21 January 2022

This is an excellent piece....thanks for sharing....

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 January 2022

Beautifully inked about the winter. The trees stand tall to its onslaughts. Loved it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2022

It's a beautiful poem. Probably this truthful words is your well wisher... have sympathy on these poor idiots

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Truthful words 21 January 2022

You have a great future provided that you you should not sell your conscience at the feet of liers and educational defamers. God bless you. I am not a cup of your tea

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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