Friday, October 17, 2014

Winter Winds Comments

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If I could - I would
wrap you in my heart
tuck safely away in a
secret cocoon
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Heather Burns
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Ken E Hall 19 October 2014

Last three lines wrap up the poem really wonderfully.. making it very heart warming indeed to read...regards

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 18 October 2014

short but sweet, a lovely write romantic...

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

Beautiful flow of words...... If I could - I would wrap you in my heart tuck safely away in a secret cocoon Loved reading it. Once again a short and sweet write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2014

Until the haling winter winds of life subsides. Winter winds poem is the excellent work nicely penned from heart.

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