Winter Twilight On An Ancient Battlefield Comments

A poignantly symbolic picture of a parting. The daily battle of egos in relationships is presented artistically n ingeniously. A deep psychological analysis of a crumbling relation that is drifting into stillness n silence beyond the realm of fights n arguments. Thats what i get from the poem. Correct me if i'm wrong. But even on the surface level, the scene of an ancient battlefield grips the reader n i can feel the winter chill n see the fading light of a departing day.

Wonderfully penned sir..... Well penned... I would like you read my poems and express your views too.. Naila