Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Winter To Summer (In Florida) Comments

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Brown gives way to green over green to turn brown again
Stuffy rooms with thick air breathe freely just for a moment
Until the humming sound of the air conditioning suffocates
The lazy days monopolized by grey clouds over the river
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Kristina Louisa Carr
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Susan Lacovara 06 May 2014

My younger brother just arrived back k in New York after wintering in Florida and swear the winter never left Long Island, therein treating him to a second spring! I could feel the humidity rising in your write. A great piece with plenty of steaming description. Stay cool....And have a peaceful day in the sunshine!

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Susan Lacovara 06 May 2014

My younger brother just arrived back in New York after his winter in Florida...he swears that winter never left Long Island and feels he will be treated to a second spring. Lucky him! Have a peaceful day in the sunshine, I loved your descriptions of the sweltering heat...stay cool!

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Kristina Louisa Carr

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