Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Winter Tear Drops Comments

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The winter snow,
felt cold against her cheeks,
and it seemed like forever,
had fallen before her eyes',
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Jennifer Louise Johnson
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Khairul Ahsan 21 October 2013

'The promises echoed, through her brain, like a freight train, as the tears fell to the snow, like rain they poured...' I like these lines. These are beautiful! If you have time, please do read some of mine.! ?

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