Thursday, May 12, 2011

Winter (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Snow is really cold,
it can freeze you to the heart.
Winter's a season.
A season of thick warm clothes.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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