Friday, October 16, 2015

Winter Sunshine Comments

Rating: 4.3

You fall from benevolent skies
Gently kiss the plains and peaks

You bring relief to cracked smiles
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Nosheen Irfan
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Ramesh Rai 29 April 2016

Sunshine is soothing in winter only otherwise it is parching. But we can not stop the nature. Lovely and soothing write befitting the nature.. Thanks for sharing.

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I too want to go outside. So beautiful a poem! Nature comes alive in an excellent way that is only possible when gifted poets like Nosheen writes. Well done my friend.

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Manonton Dalan 08 January 2016

I love winter I can leave my lunch in my car for one thing

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Akhtar Jawad 28 December 2015

An outing in a winter sun shine, taking snacks in the Shalimar Garden and when I was in my thirties. Many sweet memories I still keep when I was residing in Lahore. Your warming poem awakened a lovely past. Nice to read it.

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Paul Reed 21 December 2015

Great to read..a true friend is winter sunshine

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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