Friday, June 5, 2009

Winter Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

the morning started with fog
and now late, a dark sky hangs over Brisbane;
in the West a child has scrawled
untidy clouds
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Raj Arumugam
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Terry Craddock 19 June 2016

'and the remaining pieces of silver are eaten like potato chips by the night the winter night takes the sun in her ample breasts the moon looks helpless on the opposite side' so wonderfully unique, masterful

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 June 2009

Sweet and cute poem on winter sunset...10+++

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