Friday, September 21, 2012

Winter Sun Comments

Rating: 0.0

Rounded sun so very bright,
Fading fast on soft snow white,
Slowly, creeping windless cold,
Anew and the passing old.
...
Read full text

Philo Yan
COMMENTS
Philo Yan 21 September 2012

Hi Nurain Ali-balogun, I just started writing poetry. Is there a significance with regards to the six lines and fourty-two syllables? As for the seven syllables, the words came to me as I look at the painting. I appreciate and thank you for your comments. ----------------- Thank you Unwritten Soul for your comment. Just would like to know which pic are you referring to?

0 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 21 September 2012

Lovely write and the pic was awesome! ! ! loved it_Unwritten Soul

0 0 Reply
Nurain Ali-balogun 21 September 2012

Six lines and fourty-two syllables... Brilliant. The seven syllables, it is just your style or a poetic phenomenon I don't know about?

0 0 Reply
Philo Yan

Philo Yan

Malaysia
Close
Error Success