Thursday, February 7, 2019

Winter Storm - I Comments

Rating: 5.0

A nice bird, with sweet
melody, was healing mind.
Storm came, no more songs!
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Devanshu Patel
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Mahtab Bangalee 17 February 2019

inside storm destructs all melody through in and out.....! /// excellently composed the HAIKU

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Abhipsa Panda 14 February 2019

all kinds of storm steal melodies..well penned

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 February 2019

Winter Storms, all the four Haikus 1-4 are beautifully conceived. I enjoyed them.

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Savita Tyagi 07 February 2019

Winter as metaphors is used beautifully. Enjoyed reading all three of them Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 February 2019

Storm brings destruction and destruction destroys the nest of bird and sweet sound. But nice bird's chirping of freedom we hear gratefully. A nice poem is interestingly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem...10

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2019

Profound, and after storm will be heartwarming song.10+++++

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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