Winter Solstice Comments

Not amongst A Noun I Mouse`s vest. Should be in that pocket left. To be, per chance, taken out You see, at a glance, With winter Solstice having cleft; the length of days by nature at its best. To the West from the East, it will move as a hard headed hot breathing beast. From this night, the knight of the day whilst take bits of dark in incremental theft.- Zhev Freed

bring your ear and keep on your heart - listen best something of you /// wonderful poem Let your soul laugh let your heart sigh out that long held breath so hollow in your stomach so swollen in your throat

.....a wonderful poem, cold winter nights have a special charm ★

nice good to see a nice poem, keep writing and may the search for God never end

Amazing poem. Keeping it by my breast all winter long. ~~sjg