Monday, July 28, 2008

Winter's Farewell. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Iron-gray and warmth repelling
Cloud clad skies in winter drab.
Lowering and laughter quenching.
Cold errodes in icy grab.
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COMMENTS
Robert Howard 18 December 2008

Beautifully constructed and strongly focused. The visual and sonic images perfectly support the poem's inevitable drive toward spring's renewal.

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Bob Gibson 09 August 2008

What a brilliant poem! a 10 definatly and a keeper!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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