+ Winter's Chill Comments

Yes, a very bitter-sweet description of Winter. It's not pleasant to be cold inside and out.

beautifully done! you know if you have someone to work with you on the music, this certainly could stand as a song lyric. To my ear it actually makes a better song lyric than a poem, since it leaves less for the reader to imagine -a main component of a poem. It fairly screams for music, don't you think?

When you speak so achingly for yourself you can't help but speak for others. Thank you.

A very soft write, full of yearning, very touching..

i feel a love lost here as in 'Red Sky' and my own life 10 for love