Monday, August 5, 2013

Winter's Air H B Syllable Count 2-3-5-7-10 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Winter
trees stand bare
looks for coats to wear
hovers together seeking
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Heather Burns
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Valsa George 06 August 2013

A minuscule of poem bringing out the entire feel of leafless winter! !

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Danny Draper 06 August 2013

Delicate and complete the ice is numb the poem succint replete.

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Dave Walker 06 August 2013

A great poem. Sometimes winter can look so beautiful, but sadly it can also be very cold.

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Tribhawan Kaul 06 August 2013

Very nice. I am waiting for the winter arrive. Happy writing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

Winter's arrival nicely described. We must get coats ready from the closets. Thank you.

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