Thursday, November 30, 2017

Winter Rhapsody Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the tempests of Time
Have shattered one by one
The weary leaves of years,
And the certainty of spring
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Valsa George 04 April 2018

The heartfelt musings of a lovelorn soul! The underlying sense of pain and longing is palpable in every line! The melancholic tone touches at the heart strings!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

A gorgeous poem on love and melancholy on a metaphorical base. Touching description. I quote.......... ...............The weary leaves of years, And the certainty of spring Has gone away with hope, ................. .......................Gone is the time... Gone is the love... Gone is the dove... Thanks for sharing.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 November 2017

A beautifully crafted write full of vivid images. Beautiful lines at the end....10

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