Friday, June 25, 2021

Winter Rains ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

When winter is on the grass dances to the tunes of dews
and the wind carries a lusty scent all around,
No melody is better than the harvest song.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Varsha M 30 June 2021

Sirji beautifully portrayed. There is true winters without having a bite of ice cream. I really enjoyed. Beautiful.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 June 2021

I can feel the poem. Beautifully described. Lovely lovely thought.

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Suzon Albert 27 June 2021

Outstanding poem with free flowing words.

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Anjandev Roy 26 June 2021

Simply superb....

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Anjandev Roy 26 June 2021

No melody is better than the harvest song.

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Zumas Millamo 26 June 2021

Rare but worthy to enjoy.

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Poetic Sky 26 June 2021

Musical poem...Yellow faces of daffodils sings and dances, While the occasional rain resounds pit, pat, pit, pat,

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Darren Jkoeryo 26 June 2021

Excellent winter rains. I enjoyed reading your poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 June 2021

A beautiful write!

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*Sunprincess* 26 June 2021

Awesome poem, seasonal beauty.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 June 2021

I hope you got my comment. And Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'The value of life and oxygen

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 June 2021

Such beautiful imagery! I love this.

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Gordon Walter 25 June 2021

Feast of season. Ice Creammmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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Michael Jack 25 June 2021

The springtime is a gift from God. Infact all time is a gift.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 25 June 2021

I love this season and the last stanza is extraordinary, Ice world meting on tongue. WOW 5

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