Winter Rain Comments

A MASTER PIECE OF IMAGE CREATION.......WITH BEAUTIFUL PHRASES, WITH NICE EPITHETS, AND I AM CENT PERCENT IN AGREEMENT WITH KAREN DEEKS.

Hello ijlal... Right from the surprising thump of the first line, I knew this was going to be a good one. You flit from scene to scene as a very observant butterfly, soaking up the atmosphere. Perfectly descriptive, which opens my minds eye to a world of possibilities in a winter rain. Beautiful language. Thank you Karen