Winter Pressure Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Winter Pressure

Rating: 5.0


Of late, looking up:
the density of stars
in the Sagittarian centre
of the Milky Way;
the Mariana Trench;
and pressure.

The doona was invented
by the heaviness of blankets.

Downa became doona,
for depression and feathers don't fit.

It's time for a light warmth,
isn't it?

Winter Pressure
Wednesday, May 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: comforting,light,sleep,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
doona: Australian for duvet, dyne, comforter?

written May 16 Downunder.3 blankets are gettinga bit heavy.

The trench visited recently. Plastic found down there.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 May 2019

Dona was invented by heaviness is really very amazing and this is nicely drafted.10

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Douglas Scotney

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Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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