Monday, January 7, 2019

Winter Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

My hands are cold and numb
So is my heart
Winter is my friend
Making me cold
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Nosheen Irfan
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Anjandev Roy 18 December 2023

This is simply glorious....thanks a lot....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 December 2023

Quite a poem TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2023

Beautiful metaphored poem. TOP Marks, The graphic is brilliantly chosen and so are the words. Gorgeous!

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Nadeem Ishaque 13 March 2019

So many takes on moon in poetry! This moon seems to be a cold narcissist that draws you into its orbit for its own gratification. Compare: Like the moon her kindness is If kindness I may call What has no comprehension in it But is the same for all As though my sorrow were a scene Upon a painted wall -Yeats

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 January 2019

Distant moon is calm and in cold weather reflecting calmness of love. So heart is tenderly painted with this calm love. A powerfully imagined poem is excellently penned.10

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T Rajan Evol 14 January 2019

Kuch Khatta Kuch Mitha pyar, Very well written.

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M Asim Nehal 07 January 2019

An outcry of the heart with a plea to the winter not to make so cold the mortal body by putting to the test instead be gentle like moon waning and waxing, Awesome poem well supported by fantastic and eye catching picture. Loved it....

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 January 2019

Hi Nosheen, Love brings Spring in one’s life. Rather, love is spring, with all its colours and fragrance and nectar and sweetness. Thus, “Winter Of Love” is a handsome expression signifying loss of love or fading love, between two persons who have been very close. “Distant moon” is an equally interesting metaphor, augmenting the melancholy mood of the poem. Loved this one, Nosheen.

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George Krokos 07 January 2019

I liked this poem. Very well written Nosheen.

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Nosheen Irfan

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