Winter Night & Spring Comes Comments

The water droplets Sing to the ground As the river runs full To its contentment. I like this part best - most poetic and full of meaning.

I could see, in a way, that the water drops gathering (to warm each other in winter) were like the people (gathering to warm each other! !) Could you bring this into the poem some way...how the two are alike? Just a thought!

Leroy: I see Sir William has tought thee well....a splendid poem of seasons You have written well........................G

That was pretty =) I liked it a lot