Saturday, May 26, 2018

Winter Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't ask me about the winter night
There were stars and moon, was light
There were shivers, trembles and the frostbites
Even a single matchstick produced warmth and heat
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Akshita Bindal
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2018

a single matchstick produced warmth and heat Storm came to evoke pleasure Where the blues were tuned to hues of white. very symbolic, light, night, winter, very fine poem. thank u. tony

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Akshita 27 May 2018

Thank you so much that's a pleasure that you caught one of the key in the poem. It is really motivating for me. Thank you Dr. Tony Brahmin

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 May 2018

Hi Akshata, Beautiful poem. On the wonders of winter, I hope a North Indian winter. You concluding line, (In winter nights) For greens, the light has to put up a fight. Wow! Loved this one. Wonderful expression, fantastic imagery. And the rhyme.Your innate talent is manifest here. Great. Continue writing. A 10++++ and onto MyPoemList.

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Akshita 27 May 2018

Thank you so much for inspiring.

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