Winter mornings
Misty dawns
Shivering sunshine
Dew drops on lawns
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'Winter mornings Misty dawns Shivering sunshine Dew drops on lawns' absolutely love this and 'Canvass of Winter skies Colours splashed With many dyes' I love and delight in the innocent of your words, seeing through the beauty of your imagination
Dear Nalini, Fantastic poem. You make me nostalgic of my winters in Delhi. Although my asthma gets worse during winter, after an arduous summer we used to look forward to the onset of winter and all the festivals that winter brings with itself. My favourite season, in spite of the hazards it causes to my health. In South, there is no winter worth the name, you know. If I may suggest, the last word in the 12th line could be changed to hues, although you would miss the rhyme. Just a suggestion. Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem. Continue writing.
the description of winter panorama is wonderful.......full 10 points to you..
Perfect winter scene created with apt words and complementary details. It makes a wonderful picture. Thanks.
Winter times Are such a treat In nature's arms Time to retreat I agree with you on this since I love basking in the winter sun and going outdoors on picnics so as to embrace the sun's loving warmth. Enjoyed.
Beautiful imagery with wonderful rhythm and flow and beautifully written!
Little birds fly and nicely described winter morning. nice winter poem shared on.
winter times, are such treat! In nature's arms, time to retreat. ....... and timer also for Naturre to retreatt. wonderful imagery. Thank. you for sharing.